Book Review: Good Mothers Don't by Laura Best

by Kaylie Seed

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Content Warning: mental illness

Laura Best’s Good Mothers Don’t follows Elizabeth McKay and her experience with mental illness in the 1960s and 1970s while living in a small farming community in Nova Scotia. Elizabeth has two young children, Jacob and Jewel, and a husband named Cliff, who all love her dearly; she’s living a good life. Elizabeth begins to unravel as she starts hearing voices and imagining herself harming her children. She’s aware that something is wrong, but she can’t seem to control her impulses. A testament to the fact that mental illness can affect anyone regardless of their life situation, Good Mothers Don’t attempts to shed light on how mental illness was treated in the sixties and seventies. 

Elizabeth’s narration in the beginning of the story is very scattered, obviously to show the reader the mental state that she is in, yet at times it can be difficult to follow because it’s like being in the mind of someone who cannot control their thoughts. As Elizabeth unravels, the reader will see the lack of support for her mental illness from her husband’s family, who simply think she is “crazy” and not actually in need of help. This part of the novel feels rushed, and Elizabeth’s mental illness feels undeveloped because there is a sudden jump in time to when Elizabeth is well. 

Best has clearly done her research when it comes to how mental illness was viewed and treated in this era. Elizabeth is taken away and is prescribed pills and electroshock therapy to help cure her ailments, which causes memory loss for her. Elizabeth is getting well but cannot remember much of her life before she was in Harmony House; but as she begins to find out who she was, her voice becomes clearer than it was in the beginning. The issue with Good Mothers Don’t is that it feels like only the surface has been scratched, and it is lacking depth. Best’s prose draws the reader in, yet something feels missing even when the story comes to an end. Good Mothers Don’t is a lovely piece of Canadian historical fiction, I just wish that it went even deeper with the themes that were presented and that the plot was more developed in places.

Thank you Nimbus Publishing for the complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review!

In Conversation with M.K. Krys author of This Town is Not All Right

With Kim McCullough

 
Photo by Shannon Mancuso

Photo by Shannon Mancuso

 

This Town is Not All Right is set in a fictional American East Coast town; how did you choose the setting and what were some of the challenges when writing the setting of this book? 

I chose a fictional setting for a few different reasons. The idea for the book came from a real life “UFO” sighting that took place in the 1960s in Shag Harbor, Nova Scotia. Local residents claimed to have seen an aircraft crash in the harbor, but when the coast guard arrived no trace of the craft was ever found. I thought it would be fun to write a story about kids who discovered the truth behind this crash. THIS TOWN was initially set in Shag Harbor, but as the plot unfolded the setting looked less and less like the real life town I’d based the story on. Somewhere along the way, I decided to stop trying to make the plot fit into the setting that inspired the story and let the plot flourish in a fictional one. Of course creating a fictional town has it’s own challenges. Namely, creating a fictional town!

The characters in this book all have different personalities, interests and strengths. I was struck by how clearly each character was presented. How do you balance the need for fast-paced action with the need for characters the reader can care about and engage with?

Thank you! I really believe that the best stories start with good characters. No matter how propulsive and fun the plot twists, a story will fall flat if the reader doesn’t care about the people they’re happening to. I’ve found that when I’ve focused my attention on creating engaging, three-dimensional characters first, the results are always better. Don’t get me wrong, plot is also important, but getting a handle on the characters is always my first priority. From there, the character’s individual personalities help inform the plot to a certain degree by how they react to the twists I throw at them. 

Are there any characters or events you wish you'd been able to explore more? If so, which ones, and what would you add or change?

I might have said yes at one point, but I now believe everything that made it into the final draft is all that needs to be there. I was fairly aggressive with edits. If it didn’t propel the story forward or provide meaningful characterization, I ditched it, and I hope that what’s left behind is a tight, fun plot that keeps young readers engaged. 

The twins, Beacon and Everleigh, are mourning the death of their older brother Jasper. What kind of research into grief did you do while writing this book?

I did a fair amount of research on grief, but the vast majority was informed by my experience with losing my dad at 18. Something that always stuck with me is how quickly everyone wants you to move on and heal. But grief doesn’t fade away quickly, or, in Beacon’s case, go away because the world needs saving. I wanted to show young readers that’s it’s normal for healing to take time, to highlight characters grieving in different ways, and ultimately, to provide hope that it will get better. The book is a sci-fi adventure, but at its heart it’s about a family dealing with loss. 

You’ve previously written books for Young Adult readers including HexedCharmed, and Dead Girls Society. What made you write for the Middle Grade audience with This Town is Not Alright? Was there something about this story that you felt appealed to a younger age group or was it a new challenge for you?

THIS TOWN actually started out as a young adult novel. But after I’d written a few chapters I realized the plot was better suited for a middle grade audience. I really liked the idea of younger kids who were still trying to figure out how they fit into their own world stumbling onto a world-sized problem. Once I made the change it really allowed me to run wild with fun, voicey characters and adventurous plot twists that might not have worked for an older audience. It was a lot of fun! And there’s the added benefit that my eleven-year-old can read this one.

Cloud Lake Literary serves as both a space for readers as well as writers. What advice would you give to aspiring authors? This could be about the writing process, the writers journey, or even about navigating the publishing world.

Get involved in the online author community. This business is so fun and exhilarating, but it can also be frustrating at times. It’s been tremendously helpful and comforting having friends who get it that I can turn to for advice and a good old-fashioned vent every now and then. Some of my closest friends are authors I met online. 

This Town is Not All Right ends on a significant and pretty shocking cliffhanger. Are there plans for a sequel? A series? 

The sequel to This Town, called THIS TOWN IS A NIGHTMARE, comes out August 21st, 2021! I can’t wait for readers to see what this spooky town and its not quite right residents have in store for you this time.

What are your “must-read” book recommendations and what books have had the most impact and influence on your writing?

Save the Cat by Blake Snyder has been my secret, not-so-secret, weapon. It’s a screenwriter’s guide on story structure that divides a story into 15 plot beats, each of which serves a particular function in a story. I highly recommend it for aspiring authors looking for a starting point. 

I would be remiss if I didn’t also mention Twilight. For all of its faults, Twilight did what a lot a lot of authors only wish they could, which is to keep readers obsessively engaged and turning the pages. It’s something I’m always striving for. 

On a personal level, my critique partner, Ruth Lauren, constantly inspires me. She’s incredibly driven and determined and the most incredible writer I know. Her debut middle grade novel, Prisoner of Ice and Snow, is out now from Bloomsbury. Think Prison Break meets Game of Thrones. Check it out! 

Book Review: If I Tell You the Truth by Jasmin Kaur

by Kaylie Seed

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Content warning: sexual assault, police brutality, immigrant trauma, victim-blaming, domestic violence, alcoholism, mental illness

Jasmin Kaur has crafted an extraordinary piece of art with her novel If I Tell You the Truth. Kaur has blended poetry, prose, and illustrations to create a story of heartache, pain, and love between mother and daughter. Kiran moved to Canada at nineteen to attend university, but her reason goes far beyond just wanting an education. Kiran is fleeing Punjab from the man who raped her— not only to save herself, but to save the unborn child she is carrying because of his heinous act. After giving birth to her daughter Sahaara, Kiran overstays her student visa and ends up living in Canada illegally as an undocumented immigrant for nearly two decades. Kaur also weaves in Sahaara’s own coming-of-age story, as she learns the truth of Kiran’s past and begins seeking justice for her mother. 

Kaur’s characterization is nearly flawless and even manages to make the poetry that Kiran and Sahaara write sound so distinctive as Kaur goes back and forth between their perspectives. If I Tell You the Truth is part poetry and part prose, something that has become quite popular in the last few years. Readers will experience this story through poetry, that helps carry the story forward, and also through the narrative between characters. Kaur blends these mediums along with illustrations that help to give more dimension to the novel.

If I Tell You the Truth has a lot of heavy topics that play off one another as the story progresses. Sexual assault, immigrant trauma, and victim-blaming are the central topics of this novel but at the same time so are unconditional love, the mother-daughter relationship, and how art is a positive release for negative energy. Kaur certainly is talented, and it’s no surprise that this novel has high praise; not only is If I Tell You the Truth timely, but it is also loud and unapologetic, leaving the reader feeling empowered. While this 400+ page book may seem daunting to some readers, it should be noted that while there are heavy topics in If I Tell You the Truth, Kaur has written them in such a light and airy way that the reader can finish it quite quickly. If I Tell You the Truth is a story that will stay with me for a long time. Kaur has so much to share with the reading world, and I cannot wait to see what she creates next. 

*Thank you HarperCollins Canada for the complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review

Book Review: This Town is Not Alright by M.K. Krys

By Kim McCullough

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This Town is Not All Right by Thunder Bay author M.K. Krys is a middle-grade sci-fi novel that blends fast-moving action and sympathetic, captivating characters with a dark, moody setting and surprising plot twists. 

Beacon and his twin sister Everleigh are not thrilled when their father uproots them from their home in Los Angeles to make a new start in the small coastal town of Driftwood Harbor. After the death of the twins’ older brother Jasper, a fresh start may be just what the family needs. Despite his sadness at leaving his friends behind, Beacon hopes the move will shake his sister from the grief and guilt she feels over the tragedy. 

The family has barely arrived when strange events start to occur. The twins meet the too-perfect, mannequin-like Jane, leader of the Gold Stars, a “youth group that aims to promote social responsibility in kids.” 

Beacon, Everleigh and their father settle into a local inn until they find a house of their own. The owner, Donna, is fierce and angry for no reason that Beacon can see. Unable to sleep his first night under her roof, Beacon is staring out his window at the ocean when he sees Jane disappear into the waves. When the local sheriff arrives, he is unconcerned about the drowning girl. Beacon is later shocked to find out that Jane was home, safe in her bed all along.

The next day, Everleigh heads off to the local auto shop. She is a genius at fixing cars—her brother Jasper taught her everything she knows. Beacon, left on his own, heads out on his skateboard to explore. Before long, he finds himself in a dark forest, where he meets Arthur, a science nerd who studies aliens. He tells Beacon about the rumoured UFO that crash-landed in Driftwood Harbor years before. Strange things have been happening ever since.

Once the twins start at their new school, Beacon’s suspicion of the innkeeper and sheriff grows to include the school nurse, and the exceptionally well-behaved students. When Everleigh undergoes an inexplicable personality change and shows up to dinner in a skirt, Beacon knows something is really wrong.

Beacon and Arthur team up to solve the mystery. Their investigation takes them from the nurse’s office to church basements and beyond as they try to outrun danger at every turn.

Krys keeps the plot rollicking along with enough character detail and plot development to keep a middle-schooler engaged, but not so much that the story gets bogged down in wordy descriptions. She’s crafted a mystery where everyone in the town seems to be hiding a dark secret—Jane, the owner of the inn, the sheriff, and even the twins’ father.

What is going on with Jane? What is the twins’ father really doing in Driftwood Harbor? Will Beacon’s sister ever go back to normal? And will they survive the coming battle? Just when it seems these questions will be answered, the twist ending leaves the reader hanging, wanting more. 

Book Review: Ties that Tether by Jane Igharo

by Kaylie Seed

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Content warning: traumatic birth

Ties That Tether, set in Toronto, Canada, is a unique love story that addresses immigration, race, and culture in a lighthearted manner. Author Jane Igharo immigrated to Canada from Nigeria when she was twelve and it’s evident that her own experience helped inspire the creation of her contemporary romance novel. Twenty-five-year-old Azere wants nothing more than to please her mother, who has a high regard for their Edo heritage and culture, but when Azere falls head over heels for Rafael, a white man her mother would never approve of, she begins to question all that she’s ever known. Told from Azere’s perspective (and occasionally Rafael’s), Ties That Tether pulls on the reader’s heartstrings as Azere and Rafael attempt to figure out what it is that seems to tie them together.

Igharo addresses so many important topics throughout Ties That Tether, including heritage, immigration, culture, traditions, race, interracial relationships, identity, the mother-daughter relationship, family dysfunction, unconditional love, and so much more. Ties That Tether is a love story at its core, but the layers and topics that are woven into the story make it so much more complex, which is more engaging for the reader. Igharo mixes in some of the Edo language throughout Ties That Tether and really immerses the reader into the culture, which also helps bring depth to this story. Igharo’s prose flows incredibly smoothly, making the reading experience enjoyable. Throughout the story, Igharo nods to various romantic movies, all of which Azere adores, and this brings in a lovely pop culture note to Ties That Tether. A contemporary romance that also identifies the struggles of the immigrant experience, Ties That Tether is a playful, easy read. Igharo’s story made its way into my heart and I know that Ties That Tether will stay with me for a very long time.

Thank you to Penguin Random House Canada for the complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review.

Book Review: Punching the Air by Ibi Zoboi and Yusef Salaam

by Christine McFaul

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Punching the Air is a stunning, contemporary YA novel co-written by best-selling author Ibi Zoboi and prison reform activist, Yusef Salaam, of the Exonerated Five. Drawing on Salaam’s life experiences, it tells the story of sixteen-year-old Amal Shahid—artist, poet, and free-thinker—whose life is derailed when an altercation amongst teens in a gentrifying neighbourhood ends with a white youth in a coma.

Amal, who is Black and Muslim, must now defend himself, 

because where I come from

jail or death

were the two options…handed to us

because where he comes from

the American Dream

was the option…handed to them

It does not matter that Amal is innocent. He is convicted of a crime he did not commit and sent to prison. There, despair and anger threaten to overwhelm him, but love, community, and self-expression through art keep his mind free.

Amal's story unfurls in verse. Zoboi’s powerful lyricism is amplified by subtle and brilliant textual choices. The unique presentation of words on the page, shifting, scattering, grouping again, and interspersed with illustrations, mimic the effect of thoughts flowing through Amal’s mind. When combined with the first-person point of view, it makes the reader's experience of the narrative powerfully intimate and deeply personal. The absence of any period punctuation marks enables the flow and emphasizes where question marks are used, creating full stops where the reader must slow down and consider the importance of questions being posed. 

Why me? Why us?

Intelligent and self-aware, Amal provides the answers through an incisive unmasking of cultural and social systems. From a media that shapes him and his friends into “thugs hoodlums men” while the white and racist teenagers who incited the fight are “having fun loved…full of potential boys” to the sinister injustices of a supposed justice system where for Amal, “it’s guilty until proven innocent” the rush from “kid to criminal to felon to prisoner to inmate” greased by years in a “Prison Prep” school system, and ending with his entry into the modern prison system inextricably linked to slavery through the 13th Amendment. 

so when you did… 

whatever they think you did 

your life…belongs to them

Line by line Amal’s exposition manifests the stifling confinement felt at the intersection of so many deeply biased systems.

Pressing 

down on me

on us

so hard

that the weight 

of the world

made us crack

split in half 

And yet, Amal’s character rises, and love emerges as a powerful theme in this story. The rumination on its many, varied forms permeates the text throughout. In the form of family, friends, and community, their love an affirmation, “like Grandma’s needle and thread to fix me and put me back together again”. In gorgeously soft moments of introspection,

My umi’s face is

            the most beautiful in the world 

Skin

like sleeping in on snow days

beneath thick blankets

black 

Amal’s character at times uses words, and at times art to give outward expression to this exploration of love. With a crayon and paper “this little bit of freedom in my hands” the story culminates in an unforgettable last line "My truth” and the story ends with the hopeful act of Amal telling the world who he is on his own terms, through his art. 

Punching the Air is gutting and uplifting. I recommend that every teenager read this book before finishing high school. It is a timely and compelling example of the power of, and absolute necessity for, more #OwnVoices stories. 

*If you would like to find more children’s books by #OwnVoices authors/illustrators, the FOLD organization is an excellent resource for Canadian content/talent.

            FOLD Kids Promoting diverse Canadian children’s literature 

            thefoldcanada.org

            @FoldKids (on Instagram and Twitter) 

**If you are interested in reading more on the need for more representation and diversity in the publishing industry, The New York Times opinion piece by Richard Jean So & Gus Wezerek “Just How White is the Book Industry,” published December 11, 2020, is a great place to start.

Book Review: Dark Horses by Susan Mihalic

by Kaylie Seed

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Content Warning: sexual abuse of a child, death of a pet, rape, graphic scenes

Susan Mihalic's debut psychological thriller Dark Horses is a twisted tale about finding our voices amongst chaos and learning how to overcome the darkest parts of ourselves. Mihalic has taken horses, a very innocent, innocuous topic, and has created a story filled with hurt, heartache, and malice. Roan Montgomery is an equestrian prodigy who plans to follow her father’s footsteps by making it to the Olympics, and she plans on not letting anything stand in her way. Soon, the reader will learn that Roan’s life is anything but the wholesome girl-next-door image that she portrays to her fans; Roan is living a life of pain, filled with a darkness that she compartmentalizes so well that she doesn’t even see the true evil that lurks in her life.

Dark Horses is written from Roan’s perspective and the reader will learn quickly that she is a lot more grown up than her age. What makes this even more layered is Mihalic’s use of the word “Daddy” that Roan uses for her father throughout the story. This truly shows that Roan has had to grow up a lot faster than she should have. Roan is a paradox in this case because she acts like someone much older than herself yet she is holding onto the childhood she was never given the chance to have, but desperately needed. Mihalic has crafted Roan to be both likeable and flawed; the reader will be rooting for her throughout Dark Horses.

Mihalic’s Dark Horses is not an easy read and it is not a book for everyone, yet it’s highly recommended. The topics brought up throughout the story can make it difficult for the reader if they aren’t mentally prepared, but Mihalic has crafted such an important story about resilience, particularly about surviving sexual abuse, that it warrants praise. Dark Horses is exquisitely written and Mihalic isn’t afraid to push boundaries, which is one reason why this book is so fantastic. Other themes that Mihalic has written about in Dark Horses include power, coming-of-age, unconditional love, and the father-daughter relationship. Mihalic’s prose flows incredibly smoothly, making Dark Horses a book the reader will fly through. As this is Mihalic’s debut, I’m very interested to see what she comes up with next. She is an author we need to keep on our radar.

Thank you, Simon & Schuster Canada for the complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review!

#PoetryPaidMe

by Evan J

Photo by Evan J

Photo by Evan J

Nisha Patel, an award-winning spoken word poet and Edmonton’s current Poet Laureate, recently used the hashtag #PoetryPaidMe in a series of social media posts that publicized her billable rates for poetry-related undertakings—performances, commissions, mentoring, etc. While this in itself is significant, what is more significant are the high prices she charges, and her justification for these prices, (rightfully) based on her expertise. The posts promote the need for the artistic community to have several necessary and overdue public conversations about the financial value of poetry, specifically about how poorly most poets get paid for their work.

Without getting too much into the history of arts funding and the Canadian public’s complex relationship with poetry, here is some background to poetry’s financial side. Here’s what happens before a poet gets paid: 

For various reasons, publishers don’t make enough from sales. Consequently, they need money to survive, so they ask politically funded arts councils and (more fruitlessly) private donors for help. Politicians then decide how much (or, more accurately, how little) money to give these arts councils. Arts councils get some money, then hand a chunk of it down to publishers, who in turn distribute it amongst their (also underpaid) staff and authors. When the process is complete, a poet will make on average $40 for a poem published in a literary journal. For better context, after writing, thinking, editing, proofing, and submitting, poets are paid less than $5 an hour.

What this financial breakdown shows, and what Patel is reminding us, is that this system is obviously broken. While the last thing I want to do is degrade poetry by demanding it fit better into a capitalist box (to talk money and poetry in the same sentence is loathsome enough), proper financial compensation is a conversation that needs to happen. Most poets in Canada would indeed practice their craft for free (and most already do), but this should not be the reality for such an important pillar of Canada’s artistic community.

How to solve this problem is the big question, and I don’t have the answer yet. Literary journals, book publishers, and arts councils are also feeling the financial crunch. But passively accepting $40 per poem just because it’s the going rate, well, I don’t think that’s going to help. What might help, for starters, is if more pressure is applied to every level where money changes hands. Poets, like other artists, should be demanding equitable pay, if not more, from the entire industry. Many poets are experts in their artistic field, and, regardless of how the grant money is distributed in Canada, they deserve to be paid accordingly.

Additionally, the flourishing poetry community should, like Patel, start conversations about financial compensation. The quantity and diversity of poets are both growing fast, and it would be wonderful if these poets could converse with all parties—other poets, arts organizations, writers’ unions, festivals, other artists, etc.—about these issues. And in those conversations, real numbers should be thrown around and considered. It would be wonderful to see a variety of charts—maybe even using the charts from Patel’s posts as the templates —that offer equitable financial rates for all the activities poets are asked to undertake.

Even if it’s plainly visible how little money is currently involved in poetry, and even if it’s disheartening to see the publishers already so strapped for cash, more money will never appear and poets will never be paid appropriately until the poets themselves start to demand it.

*Evan J is an independent, contributing writer for Cloud Lake Literary. As of this publication date, Cloud Lake Literary does not have any form of public funding or grants. We follow industry standards and pay our writers and artists out of our own (volunteer) pockets alongside any advertising and subscriptions we can obtain and still run at a deficit. We recognize and believe that all poets, writers, and artists should be paid (and paid well) for their time and skill. Always seek payment for your work.

Book Review: This Close to Okay by Leesa Cross-Smith

by Kaylie Seed

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Content warning: suicide, suicidal ideation, mental illness, infidelity, infertility, loss of a child

Leesa Cross-Smith’s latest novel This Close to Okay is a story about hope and taking chances. Tallie notices a young man sitting on the edge of a bridge and feels obligated to intervene. Even though she is a therapist, she is reaching out to this young man not because of her job, but because she feels like it’s her duty as a human being. Emmett just isn’t sure if there is anything left out there for him and is seriously contemplating suicide when this woman reaches out to help. Telling the story  in the third person from both Tallie and Emmett’s perspectives, Cross-Smith weaves together a stunning tale filled with secrets, compassion, and healing.

Tallie and Emmett form a bond with one another that can only be described as that of soulmates. They were destined to meet and change each other’s lives. Cross-Smith has lovingly crafted these characters with strengths and flaws that make them feel incredibly real. Tallie and Emmett both have lessons for the reader to learn throughout This Close to Okay, and Cross-Smith accomplishes this flawlessly.

Cross-Smith’s prose is rich and decadent. She has clearly put a lot of time and effort into creating her characters, the setting, and the overall story. Even with the heavy topics that are brought up all throughout This Close to Okay, Cross-Smith is eloquent and respectful. This is how a book about mental illness should be written. The themes all work together well, and while the topics are not new to the writing world, Cross-Smith has still managed to make them her own. This Close to Okay is nuanced beautifully and it is evident to the reader that Cross-Smith is a seasoned writer who is passionate about what she creates. I personally need to check out more of her work, and I can’t wait to see what she writes next.

*Thank you Grand Central Publishing for the complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review

In Conversation with Nadia L. Hohn author of Malaika's Surprise

With Ashliegh Gehl

 
Photo by Elizabeth Dungan

Photo by Elizabeth Dungan

 

What’s Malaika’s origin story? (When did she first surface for you? How long did you spend crafting her personality and lineage?)

My first Malaika story came about during the Writing for Children I class with Ted Staunton at George Brown College held at Mable’s Fables Bookstore in Toronto in 2010. One of my assignments was to write a picture book. I knew immediately that I wanted it to be based in the Caribbean and to feature Carnival. (In fact, one of the picture books that I illustrated and wrote as a child features both. I use this in my presentations.) The origins were also inspired by all kinds of things, including visiting Caribana parade as a child, my Jamaican heritage, Trinidad Carnival, and my family history.

What has it been like to tell Malaika’s story through Irene Luxbacher’s stunning illustrations? (Is it a collaborative process? Or is it an isolated experience?)

Originally, I wanted to illustrate the first Malaika book. My Groundwood publisher at the time, Sheila Barry, was very kind and honest. She said I have potential to be an illustrator but wanted to go with someone with more experience. When Sheila suggested Irene, I felt that she was the right choice—because she works in mixed media (how I envisioned the book), and her illustrations evoked so much emotion (I felt it in my gut). At that point, I had to let the book go in a sense, which was hard at first. This was my first picture book and I was new to the publishing process. I had to learn to trust that making a picture book is a collaborative process and that everyone involved wanted this to be the best book. I also adjusted to the idea that this story would also become Irene’s, and I am so glad that she connected with my story. We had not met until just before the launch of Malaika’s Costume but since then, we usually talk about the story after it’s complete.

You’re currently working on a Master of Fine Arts in Creative Writing at the University of Guelph. How has this experience expanded the breadth of your storytelling?

The MFA program at the University of Guelph has provided me with an opportunity to study in other forms and genres beyond writing for children and young adults. My goal was to polish my craft as a writer in the adult genres. I have learned so much already and there are opportunities to learn from the greats in CanLit. I look forward to more growth.

What do you think needs to happen within the publishing industry to ensure that more #OwnVoices are published? 

I believe that a few things need to happen in order to ensure that #OwnVoices are published. First, in Canada, we need to continue regular measurement of representation working in the publishing industry, as well as start tracking who is getting published according to their identity, including Black Indigenous People of Colour (BIPOC). Next, we need to be comfortable using language, that is, adopt a “literacy” and comfortable vocabulary use of terms like equity, anti-racism, and anti-oppression within the publishing industry.  We need to have diverse individuals at the decision-making tables. We also need to be unafraid to say what we want in our calls for submission, as well as outreach to underrepresented communities.  

In June 2020, you organized the #KidLit4BlackLivesCanada rally. What was the significance of this event? Are there more rallies or events in the works for 2021? How can others get involved?

The significance of this event was, firstly, to ally with the #KidLit4BlackLives rally held in the US. It was also an opportunity for the Black Canadian children’s literature community and allies to respond to and grieve the incidents of racial injustices experienced by Black and brown peoples in the wake of George Floyd’s murder. My hope is to have another event in 2021, so please stay tuned. You can join the #KidLit4BlackLivesCanada Facebook group and e-mail: kidlit4blacklivescanada@gmail.com.

Our audience is comprised of writers as well as readers. What advice would you give to a writer setting out on their journey? This could be about the writing process or in publicizing and sharing your work.

Start writing. Find a community. Get feedback. Read. Keep at it.  

We are always interested to hear what stories you are working on next. Are you currently writing another book, or do you have one set for publishing later this year?

I just signed a contract for an anthology of sorts so please stay tuned. I am editing my middle grade novel, plus I have some picture books that I am revising along with my young adult novel.

What books are you currently reading and which books have had the most influence on your writing or that you would consider to be your must-read books? 

Currently, I developed a self-directed reading course with a professor focusing on contemporary young adult novels about Black girls as part of my MFA program.  As part of this, I just finished reading Facing the Sun by Janice Lynn Mather, a British Columbia-based author of Bahamian heritage. I just finished reading the young adult novel, Harriet’s Daughter, by Toronto-based Afro-Trinidadian poet M. Nourbese Philip which I had not read since the late 1980s. I believe this book taught me some early lessons about writing for young people. It made me feel that my story and experiences as a Black, Caribbean, and Canadian girl mattered. Even at that age, I knew this book was special. I have not seen one like it since, but it has made me want to write more books reflecting Black, Caribbean, and African identities in Canada.

Book Review: The Butterfly House by Katrine Engberg

by Kaylie Seed

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Katrine Engberg’s forthcoming novel, The Butterfly House, features detectives Jeppe Kørner and Anette Werner, who were also the main characters in her debut, The Tenant. In this Nordic crime novel, the reader will get a glimpse into the psychiatric system in Denmark, where Engberg hails from. Jeppe sets out to find a killer who is murdering victims by draining them of blood, while at the same time Anette struggles to adjust to life as a parent and wants nothing more than to get back to work. While switching between multiple characters' perspectives, Engberg creates twists and turns that are only revealed when she wants the reader to know about them.

Engberg focuses on mental illness, homelessness, and the psychiatric system in The Butterfly House and manages to connect these themes together throughout the story to show the reader the struggles Denmark faces when it comes to mental health. Engberg has written The Butterfly House to be a book in the same series as The Tenant, however the reader does not need to have read The Tenant to understand what is going on. Engberg’s character development is near flawless, and those who have not read her first novel will still find The Butterfly House satisfying in letting the reader know who these characters are.

The Butterfly House is an entertaining whodunit that will keep readers guessing what is going to happen next. Engberg jumps to different characters throughout The Butterfly House and doesn’t necessarily say which one the narrator is following, so the reader really needs to pay attention when reading the story or they may get lost in the plot. This was the only major drawback to the novel because the focus character is switched up mid-chapter and sometimes characters are switched up multiple times, so the reader needs to make sure they’re paying attention. Overall, Engberg has created an engaging read that will leave readers wondering what is going to happen next for Jeppe and Anette.

*Thank you Simon& Schuster Canada for the complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review.

In Conversation with Lang Leav author of September Love

With Jodene Wylie

 
Photo Credit: Chloe Angelo. Visit her Instagram page here

Photo Credit: Chloe Angelo. Visit her Instagram page here

 

Special thank you to poet and author Lang Leav for offering such valuable insight into her life of writing, advice for writers, and some incredible book recommendations. Have you read September Love yet? Check out our book review here.

September Love is your seventh book of published poetry. It is introspective, considerate, and full of wonderment. How did you approach this collection (in its writing and in compiling which poems were selected) in comparison to your earlier volumes?

I was halfway through writing September Love when the pandemic hit. I completed the other half during isolation. I suppose this leant the collection a kind of duality. The introspection which is present in much of my work was considerably heightened by the six-week lockdown, which in New Zealand, was one of the strictest in the world. Everything stopped. And this sudden grinding to a halt put me in a different headspace. My priorities shifted. My calendar previously filled with travel dates and media commitments switched to meal planning, due dates for the chicken, and the rationing of supplies. This sudden need to be resourceful was born out of necessity but has since changed the way I live. In a strange way, it taught me to shut out the digital world as much as the real one. We forget sometimes that the internet is still very much a new frontier and writers of my generation are facing unchartered territory. I don’t doubt that my body of work would have been vastly different if it hadn’t been for the influence of social media. The pandemic allowed me a glimpse into this alternate universe, to write the way I probably would have, if I had followed a more traditional path. 

Ingredients of a Poem”, which can be found near the start of September Love, outlines themes, topics, and directions that poetry can take and you end the poem with the line that poetry can be: “Whatever you wish”. Then, in “No Poet”, you write that “poetry is a candle burning gently, an everlasting flame coaxing something tender, turning all toward love”. While the topic of a poem can be about whatever the poet wishes, do you think that the purpose of poetry is to evoke and/or return to a place of love and understanding either for ourselves, those around us, or our world?

The purpose of poetry has always been a subject of great contention. Some think it is a way to showcase one’s literary prowess, others believe poetry is a powerful tool that can be used to unite and inspire. Recently, we saw the latter when Amanda Gorman captivated the world with her poem ‘The Hill We Climb’during the inauguration of Joe Biden. I thought the poem was monumental on so many levels. The line, ‘even as we grieved, we grew,’ was one of clear and astonishing beauty. To me, that line alone carries the resonance of some of the greatest poems of all time. The poem in its entirety felt like a beacon of hope in a period of such uncertainty and distress. I was disappointed to see Gorman’s work panned on social media for her simple and stark use of language. The notion that poetry should be difficult is so antiquated and elitist. I lean far more toward the sentiment that poetry should not center merely on the artful depiction of emotions, but the ability to express them in a way that is resonate and impactful. 

While “Stardust” and “Twin Flames” will forever be some of my favourite poems, “To the Guy Who Claims My Poetry Was The Cause of His Break-Up” is edging in to a top position. This poem, found midway through September Love, is a wonderful breaking of the fourth wall where you, the poet, respond to your reader (or your reader’s boyfriend). Many of your poems often seem to be one side of the conversation where your words speak directly to the reader. You offer commentary, advice, and consideration to your reader and even advice on managing critics in “The Golden Rule”. What do you most hope your readers will know and understand from your poetry?

My work had already gone viral by the time I posted up a picture of myself. Until then, the general consensus seemed to be that I was a dead poet, or a white, middle-aged man. I think the last thing anyone was expecting was a young, migrant woman. My sudden appearance was met with so much misogyny and derision, I was close to giving up entirely. The voices felt almost identical to the ones that had plagued me in the small refugee town where I grew up. In many ways, my upbringing had equipped me with the mental fortitude for handling my sudden emergence into the spotlight, and the consequent onslaught of sexist and racist comments. As a society, I think we must question why this treatment is reserved exclusively for women. And why these perpetrators are allowed to cause real world damage with total impunity. Many of my readers are also aspiring writers, hoping to follow in my footsteps. A large majority are young women, meaning they will likely be victims of the same targeted harassment that I have experienced. I have always spoken honestly and openly with my readers, through social media. It seemed a natural progression to continue this tradition through my work. I feel it is my responsibility to warn others about the world they are entering and ways we can look out for each other. I suppose I would like in some way to be the person to whom I would have sought comfort as a young woman at the onset of my career. 

After a number of publications and much success, your writing is now well-referenced and internationally acclaimed having truly made an impact on the poetry community. In “My Poetry” you write: “I wanted you to know my poetry, but I never meant for you to know me”.  How has your writing changed over the years and what influence has recognition had on how much of yourself you allow into your writing?

There needs to be a healthy separation between yourself and your work. Especially since we are all at the mercy of the internet when anything that is said about you, even false, can become deeply engraved in your narrative. Malicious spreading of lies and innuendo can lead to speculation about your private life that is not only harmful to your own mental health but affects your loved ones too, meaning the damage is two-fold. The process of writing is very much like a kind of osmosis, in the way you absorb the world that you inhabit. It has taken me years to recognise what a warped and twisted one it is. But there is so much beauty there too, and I think it is worth sifting through all the bad stuff to get to the good. Authors tend to grow through their books, and I think writing September Love was a way for me to exorcise my demons, both real and imaginary. It has shown me a way forward that feels the most authentic to who I am.  

What makes a poem, in your opinion, truly great? Is it strict rules to structure, creation of a newly defined structure, the ability to evoke an emotion or feeling, the unveiling of a new truth, or something more? What makes a poem great to you?

A pivotal scene in the movie, Dead Poet’s Society springs to mind. Set in a busy classroom of an elite prep school, English teacher John Keating is scribbling away on the chalkboard, whilst referencing from a textbook titled, How to Understand Poetry. On the board, he draws out a graph measuring the worth of a poem which the students are earnestly transcribing into their workbooks. Keating appears to be going along with this process when he stops and in a dramatic turnaround, slams the textbook for its clinical approach toward something as inscrutable as poetry. He then instructs the class of stunned students to rip out the pages of the textbook, as their initial hesitancy gives way to jubilation. I was only a teenager myself when I first saw the movie, and the scene has always stuck with me. Now, as a working poet, I think it is near impossible to judge a poem, due to the subjective nature of literature. To me, a meaningful poem is the coming together of elements, that are not necessarily exclusive to the words before you on paper. I am sure we have all experienced that wonderful rush when you stumble on a particular poem, and it suddenly becomes the center of gravity, drawing everything in your internal and external world, anchoring it in that moment. That’s why you can never truly experience the same poem in the same way twice. 

I encourage every writer to read your poem “The Path of a Writer” as you get to the root of the inevitable feelings they face with descriptors like “stumbling on the ruins of a lost city, talking to its ghosts”. What advice would you give to aspiring writers and poets on their own journeys?

Everyone’s journey is their own. There is no real measure of creativity and anyone who says otherwise is kidding themselves. Writing should mirror our struggles and triumphs in a way that feels inevitable. I have an almost fatalistic approach when it comes to writing. I believe if you have a real passion for writing, it’s something you will naturally pursue, no matter the obstacles that are placed in your path. Throughout my life, I have gone through so many renditions of my creative self, only to arrive exactly where I had started. I suppose the best advice I could give to aspiring writers is to simply write. All you need is a pen and paper, and you’re set. Find your voice, no matter how long it takes, or how little you are rewarded for your efforts. Be prepared to spend your whole life perfecting your craft, and to find joy and fulfilment in the process. 

Are you working on a forthcoming book? Can you share a little about what it’s about and whether it’s poetry or fiction? 

I tend to write poetry organically and usually, there is a work of fiction running alongside this process. The two often complement each other. With the pandemic putting a line of separation between myself and my family, I’ve become really nostalgic for my youth. For writers, there is so much rich material to be found in the unattainable. When you are put in a state of inertia, the future is uncertain, so you tend to seek comfort in your past. From this distant place that I have spent so much time revisiting, a story began to emerge, and unravel before me. Sometimes you get lucky that way, a book seems to find you out of nowhere and takes you over. Then writing becomes almost effortless.  

Lastly, what have you been reading lately? Are there any books that have had a particular impact or influence on your writing that you’d recommend to our readers? 

I am such a comfort reader. I tend to go through a cycle where I systematically reread all my favourite books. I’ve just finished Black Water by Joyce Carol Oates and The Secret History by Donna Tartt. Now I’m reading Never Let Me Go by Kazuo Ishiguro. I am so looking forward to Kazuo’s new book, Clara and the Sun which comes out next month. 

About Lang Leav:

Novelist and poet Lang Leav was born in a refugee camp when her family were fleeing the Khmer Rouge Regime. She spent her formative years in Sydney, Australia, in the predominantly migrant town of Cabramatta. Among her many achievements, Lang is the winner of a Qantas Spirit of Youth Award, Churchill Fellowship and Goodreads Reader’s Choice Award. 

​Her first book, Love & Misadventure (2013) was a break out success, and her subsequent poetry books have all been international bestsellers. In 2016, Lang turned her attention to fiction, and her debut novel Sad Girls shot to #1 on the Straits Times and other bestseller charts internationally. 

​Lang actively participates in international writers festivals and her tours consistently draw massive crowds. With a combined social media following of two million, Lang’s message of love, loss and female empowerment continues to resonate with her multitude of readers.     

Lang has been featured on CNN, SBS Australia, Intelligence Squared UK, Radio New Zealand and in various publications, including Vogue, Newsweek, the Straits Times, the Guardian, and the New York Times. She currently resides in New Zealand with her partner and fellow author, Michael Faudet 

Book Review: September Love by Lang Leav

by Jodene Wylie

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It was during a casual afternoon that I found myself mindlessly scrolling through Pinterest. Beautiful houses, delicious foods, and inspirational quotes and ideas make up the bulk of my feed. I came across a poem by Lang Leav titled “Stardust,” and the rhythm of the words, the concept and idea, and the simple and effective presentation brought me to a pause. In some way, somehow, it made me feel ever so slightly more connected to our world and the people who occupy it. It was from this moment that I began to devour Lang Leav’s poetry. 

            Published in November of 2020, September Love is Lang Leav's most recent book. This capsule of escapist poetry speaks to all people in all manner of settings, but in many ways it speaks most strongly to the writer. There are poems about the “Ingredients of a Poem,” “Why [She] Write[s],” and “The Path of a Writer.” There is a poem responding to dissenting voices after they’ve read her words in “To the Guy Who Claims My Poetry Was the Cause of His Break-Up,” and one about what it is like to be a poet in today’s world in the short and succinct “Be a Poet.”

            When I read this collection, I knew that this was a book that needed to be recommended on Cloud Lake Literary’s website and social media. As writers, we seek voices and material that not only inform us but commiserate with us. We want to be understood by our peers, by those who have walked the road before us, and by those we admire. Leav's words are straightforward—by offering a specific perspective and opinion—while at the same time offering an idea for the reader to connect with in their own way and on their own terms.

            This collection presents diversified content. “Motherhood” offers a nod to mothers and the role they play. “A Life Unlived” encourages us to get out of our heads and to be more present. I also greatly appreciate “A Woman,” which reflects on societal conditions and expectations, and directs the reader to be whoever they are and to live the life they want for themselves. Even in this age of COVID-19 and its various variants, “Always Will” reminds us of a time before all of this change, difficulty, heartache, and upheaval, and takes us back to when we would never have imagined losing our “normality” and how fortunate we once were to take it for granted. Leav also shares her thoughts on love, from the beautiful and heart-warming, to the fleeting, to the devastating, and to the fond memories and reflections love has provided. 

            Leav does not seek to speak above the reader: there is no ego in her words, no attempts to outthink or outsmart, only to share her thoughts. By the end of the book you will feel as though you and Leav are dear friends, connected through her poetry of secrets, opinions, advice, and stories. She does not maintain a consistent structure, which is refreshing as you read through her collection. Poems may be designed as a paragraph, a sentence, or written in the more traditional stanza form. She puts enough words on the page to convey her thoughts and a specific emotion without bogging down the piece unnecessarily. It is both a comfort and a pleasure to read her work.

            Should you be looking for a new book of poetry to read, I highly recommend September Love. Add it to your nightstand and read a poem or two each evening and perhaps journal your thoughts on what you’ve just read. Do you connect with it? Have you experienced what she has written about? What poem would you write in response to the one you’ve just read? September Love is wonderful collection and I hope you are able to dive into it soon.

Book Review: White Ivy by Susie Yang

by Kaylie Seed

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*Content warning: corporal punishment, abusive relationships

Susie Yang's debut novel White Ivy is a coming-of-age story about the immigrant experience, with many dark undertones. Two years after Ivy Lin was born in China, her parents decided to leave her with Meifeng, her maternal grandmother, so that they could pursue the American Dream, coming back for Ivy when they could afford to do so. When Ivy and Meifeng end up in America with Ivy’s parents and new baby brother, it's the beginning of a tumultuous upbringing that sets up everything that Ivy will become: a thief, a liar, and a woman who will stop at nothing to be drenched in success.

Throughout White Ivy, the reader will see Ivy’s relationships with many different characters. Yang has sculpted such intimate details between Ivy and various characters, yet there is no relationship more important to Ivy than the one with her grandmother. Ivy and Meifeng’s bond is unlike any other in White Ivy and Yang has reminded readers that our elders are a huge reason that we end up the way we do. Ivy can be a love-to-hate character. She will make the reader mad at the choices she makes, but it’s important to remember Ivy’s life as a whole to understand the reasoning for her choices.

Yang has created a dark, slow-burn novel that keeps the reader engaged as they learn about what's going on in Ivy's life. Yang’s prose throughout White Ivy is breathtaking and captures the reader’s attention all throughout the story. Yang addresses themes such as corporal punishment, immigration, language barriers, racism, abusive relationships, and intergenerational trauma. All of these themes entwine with one another and it's clear that Yang has put a lot of thought into how Ivy's upbringing will affect her in the present. White Ivy is a raw, real, and heartbreaking coming-of-age story that reminds readers that their childhoods can truly dictate their future if they let them.

*Thank you Simon & Schuster Canada for the complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review!

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Book Review: Malaika's Surprise by Nadia L. Hohn

by Ashliegh Gehl

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Nadia L. Hohn builds on her children’s literature legacy with Malaika’s Surprise, her third picture book published by Groundwood Books. 

Hohn, a Toronto-based writer, educator, musician and artist, threads the breadth of her expertise through this memorable series to present a heartwarming narrative enriched by Irene Luxbacher’s stunning illustrations. It’s fair to say that Hohn and Luxbacher are a dream team making culturally-rich picture book magic that will stand the test of time.

If you’re new to Malaika’s world, prepare to be enveloped in the warmth of her strong, beautiful voice which is a blend of standard English and Caribbean patois. Malaika was born in the Caribbean, her mother is Afro-Caribbean, and her step-father and step-sister are White French-Canadians. The series’ linguistic stylings embody a diverse community wrapped in inclusivity. The glossary of Caribbean, French and Arabic terms in the frontmatter give a sneak peek to the book’s vibrancy.

What’s great about this series, is that Malaika’s CostumeMalaika’s Winter Carnival and Malaika’s Surprisehave the strength to stand on their own as independent reads. However, when read together, they soar even higher, reaching new heights as Malaika changes and develops. Children and adults alike can believe in Malaika, and empathize with her challenges and understand her worries. 

In Malaika’s Surprise, Hohn strategically builds on the robust foundation of her storyline while preserving Malaika’s observant, curious and caring nature. When Malaika spies a new neighbour, she instantly translates it into the possibility of making a new friend. A friend who speaks Arabic and, much like Malaika, is new to Canada. Within the beauty of differences are the roots of similarities. Through their gestures and interactions is a friendship taking shape. One which the reader hopes to see more of, possibly in future books, as this budding relationship flourishes and blossoms. 

The heart of this series is tethered to family and in Malaika’s Surprise surfaces thoughts about purpose and place. When Malaika learns that she’s about to be a big sister to Émile, her forthcoming baby brother, she wonders how her family will change, and how it will alter the relationship she has with her mother. The idea of a new baby fills Malaika with curiosity, but also with hesitation, worry and doubt. 

Hohn’s writing is deep and immersive. The reader doesn’t think of the writer, but hears and feels Malaika as she navigates her circumstances and the emotions they summon. Only when the book ends, and Malaika is left between the pages, does Hohn’s mastery of the craft command a standing ovation. 

Tools for Your Editing Toolbox

by Evan J

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photo by Evan J

My last article offered advice on why and how to proofread your submission. Now I want to switch to the step before proofreading—editing your work—and offer some tools to help improve your content. Here are three instructions to add to your editing process.

Check for accuracy.

Real objects and lifelike characters can be powerful tools in a narrative. They can draw the reader in through their relatability. But a mistake in this area can completely kill a creative work. So take the time and check all of your names and objects for accuracy and credibility. Watch out for anachronisms. Google everything. If your protagonist is a First Nations Chief from Manitoulin Island, they had better have an Anishinaabe name, not a Dene or Stó:lō one. If your characters are going hunting for moose, they had better bring something bigger than a .22 calibre rifle.

Trim your work.

If you’ve ever taken a writing class, the teacher has probably explained (usually via an inappropriately morbid metaphor) the need to cull the excess content from your work. Some people suggest editing out 5 percent, others say 50 percent. And while I’m not about to throw my hat in the ring with these useless numbers, I do agree that it is a vital step to clean the dirt from your work. For most writers, locating your work’s real meaning takes many tries. We often use writing as a chisel, each written line digging towards that core idea. When we finally reach the core, we have layers of debris—unrelated lines, redundant lines. It can be difficult to delete these lines: maybe they’re a reminder of all the work it took to reach the core, maybe the line concerns some topic that you’re emotionally connected to, or maybe the line just sounds amazing! But in the end, no matter the shape or smell of that dirt, it is still dirt, still an obstruction, and it must be removed. Your readers want and deserve a clear path to your core idea.

Let the work sit unread.

Every time you read through your own work your eyes and brain get used to the order of the words. They stop questioning why you wrote what you wrote, and they start skipping sections without you even noticing. To fix this problem at the editing stage, it’s best to give the work a break. There is, of course, no specified break time for every brain, but the longer you can give it before returning to the work, the better. Deadlines are usually the main restriction that limits how much time you can let a piece sit unread. But as a golden rule, start your writing well before the deadline with the expectation of letting the work sit once or twice before you submit it. I let the first draft of this article sit unread for a week before returning to finish it. For poetry and short fiction, I often let them sit unread for two or three weeks before returning.

Book Review: East of West, The Apocalypse: Year Three by Jonathan Hickman and Nick Dragotta

by Dahl Botterill

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Jonathan Hickan - Writer, Nick Dragotta - Artist, Frank Martin - Colourist

"We would tell you to pray, but it wouldn't do any good. You have earned what is coming to you."

Jonathan Hickman's comic book series East of West began as an alternate history of the United States, opening with a story of seven nations rising from the ashes of a long-extended American Civil War. It quickly expanded, incorporating dystopian science fiction, political intrigue, horror, mysticism, and countless other aspects into a genre-bending epic western of prophecy, inhumanity, and the end of the world. The Apocalypse: Year Three concludes the tale, collecting issues 30 through 45 into a deluxe, oversized hardcover format that really gives the art an opportunity to shine.

Hickman's story has tremendous scope, and Nick Dragotta brings it to life with an ability to transform both the best and worst that humanity has to offer into something beautiful. By this third and final year of the story, the world has already been in the grips of the apocalypse for a couple years, and the various plans and machinations of those in power are either coming to fruition or being dashed to pieces. Death, despite having found his son Babylon, is still trying to save him, and the remaining horsemen are seeking the same in their efforts to usher in the end. The Chosen (those leaders that have been working to fulfill the prophetic claims of the Message) are forced to reckon with what they've wrought upon the world and what price they're obligated to pay. The characters are numerous and are all fully realized, as is the alternate future America they inhabit. Every character, from game-shaping protagonist to small but significant minor role, leaves a mark.

Hickman and Dragotta complement each other brilliantly, and the result is a stunning work of both art and literature. It won't be for everybody; it's often dark, violent, and bleak—it is the apocalypse, after all—but if it appeals to you at all, you'll probably love it. "What is the world but the arena in which we are tested?" Well, the end of that world is here, and each of the Seven Nations of America lives and breathes as a world unto itself, resulting in an America that's just as thoroughly realized as the characters. In a similar way, every genre that East of West incorporates brings something unique to the book, and the resulting graphic novel is an expressive and expansive tale that grabs the reader and doesn't let go until the final panel. 

Book Review: Downfall by Robert Rotenberg

by Kaylie Seed

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Accomplished Canadian author and criminal lawyer Robert Rotenberg’s newest crime novel Downfall focuses on the rampant issue of homelessness and poverty in Canada’s richest city, Toronto; something that is both hidden yet very visible. Not only is Downfall an entertaining read, it is also incredibly informative, as Rotenberg’s powerful prose reminds the reader that poverty and homelessness are societal issues that plague the streets of many cities across the world. Rotenberg’s research into these issues is evident throughout Downfall, and while his story is fiction, it’s easy for the reader to see that Rotenberg is incredibly passionate about this ever-worsening real life concern that begs the question: how is it that we live in such wealthy places, yet people continue to be homeless and hungry year after year? 

Nancy Parish is a lawyer who is always bailing out her best friend Melissa when she gets into trouble. When Melissa turns up telling Nancy about a killer targeting the homeless, Nancy has a hard time believing her erratic friend, but after a second body is discovered in the Humber River Valley, Nancy realizes that something sinister is going on. Head of the homicide squad Ari Greene and his partner Daniel Kennicott are tasked with finding out who is singling out and killing people in the homeless population of Toronto. At the same time, Ari’s daughter Alison is reporting the untold story of extreme poverty in Toronto and how the issues are shadowed by ignorance and privilege. 

Rotenberg has created Downfall by mixing police procedural, courtroom drama, and mystery all into one stunning novel. His characters are interesting and diverse, which is no doubt a nod to the multicultural epicentre that Toronto is. Rotenberg is clearly passionate about the issues of homelessness and poverty and that passion comes through in Downfall. There were a couple of times where things didn’t seem to flow smoothly, but overall Downfall kept my attention the entire time. Personally, this is my first time reading one of Rotenberg’s novels and I know that I’ll be keeping an eye out for his other literary works.

*Thank you Jillian Levick from Simon & Schuster Canada for this complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review!

The Little Errors That Ruin a Submission

by Evan J

photo by Evan J

photo by Evan J

In a previous article I said, “distribute your energy appropriately, get the details correct, but focus your time on the content.” However, as I read my umpteenth submission, I’m recognizing that “the small stuff” is, understandably, not obvious to new writers. Therefore, let me explicate that phrase and then reveal what the little errors are and how to fix them. 

I begin reading every submission with an open mind. I want to respect the submission, to fall in love with its content—but I also need the submission to respect me, to let me focus on the content. Errors do not let the reader focus. They are distracting.

When I find an error, my focus is cut in half. One half is still attentive to the content. But the other half is counting mistakes and estimating how much work it would take to fix the piece. With every error, half of my mind thinks: Is this a one-off problem, or should I expect more disruptions? Will there be so many errors that we won’t have time to fix them, even if the content is good? If this author can’t get the punctuation right, will the major techniques like plot also contain errors? These are not questions that you want surrounding your work, so respect your work and the submission reader by doing a thorough proofread before submitting.

How to proofread:

Find a way to print out your work and make edits on paper; the proofreading eye catches many more errors on the printed page. Then read it through very, very slowly. Read out loud. Question every spelling, every punctuation use, every everything. Then read it backwards, one sentence at a time; a backwards reading helps catch what you skimmed over accidentally. When you’re done, fix the mistakes, then print it out and repeat this process. Always aim for perfection.

The little errors to fix:

Evict every double space. Left-justify your prose. Make every straight quotation mark a curly quotation mark (' vs. “). Catch every spelling variation and verify that it’s appropriate to the national spelling of the place you are submitting (L vs. LL, O vs. OU, ER vs. RE endings, etc.). Double-check your verb tenses. And unless the guidelines say otherwise, just use Times New Roman, 12-point font. Funky fonts will not magically make your submission better. 

A trick of the trade:

 The last thing you should do before submitting your work is run it through the free Grammarly online software. Don’t take every piece of advice that it gives because it doesn’t quite understand creative writing, but do investigate what it underlines to help catch any remaining mistakes. Errors are clever and can find their way into your work when you least expect them.

Now that you’ve been educated about little errors, do your darndest to avoid them.